Hm... Interesting choice of style for this one. The beginning is strong yet subtle, good start. Not completely sure if this is mastered to the fullest of its abilities. I think it could use some reverb and possibly a slight flanger on that flowing sound in the backround... sorry but I can't find a way to describe it... The sound thats always in the backround... some sort of air noise? lol I can't describe it for the life of me... but yeh, you should know what I mean.
You should definately extend this, its too damn short.
ne wone is great
your new song is great i find nothign wrong with it anywhere and u continue to be different form the rest of newgroudns which is very good . keep at it