Nice beginning. Would love to hear it fleshed out and finished. I think you have a great scope of what this represents, however. Love the description.
Agreed with shinjiro
Would be nice if you make it into a full length theme. Nice work still.
I like this. It sounds just like you described. Have you considered making this/mixing this into a full-length battle theme? It seems like it'd be an epic idea.
oh damn it I forgot to add that it is a work in progress
I am working on a full length version but I forgot to add that I uploaded this for some feedback
but thank you