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May 3, 2012 | 6:18 PM EDT
File Info
4.5 MB
3 min 17 sec
4.26 / 5.00

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Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.

Rated 4.26 / 5 stars
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607 Plays | 23 Downloads
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Author Comments

This is my first Submission to the Newgrounds Audio Portal. I didn't do a pretty job but still here it is anyway.
Used FL Studio 10, didn't use much in it though. Made this in 7-8 hours.
Comments are appreciated very much.
Bitrate: 192 kbps



Rated 3 / 5 stars

Not exactly the kind of style I enjoy, but it's still a decent track considering it's your first submission.

First, I noticed some clipping, at 1:30 and 2:55 to be precise, so you might want to check volume levels.
I must say that the track is repetitive, so you should try adding more synths and make better transitions. But since you made this in a short time, and there's more work to be done, I think you can improve it a lot.
What I would suggest is to add a "real" beat (4x4 kick would be nice, or whatever you feel would go well), because it would sound much better that way. The structure of this track in not that great, because through the whole song I had a feeling I'm listening to some kind of build up.
But it would have been a good build up, if there was an actual drop for example at 1:30 or 2:15 . :D

You're not bad at all, just work a bit on the structure, introduce new synths, and make the track less repetitive.

XSpiritSlayerX responds:

Roger that, point taken.
Thanks DJ!


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Take your weapon out of the graveyard and use it as a monster

XSpiritSlayerX responds:

I'll take that as a satisfaction, thank you! :)