the sampling was a little off, and the filter automation was a little too choppy. keep working at it, i know you've got potential :)
you've gotta be super precise when it comes to sampling. ik this was ur first time, so just keep working on it.
one thought tho... just because its house, doesnt mean it needs to be the same measure over and over and over and over and over and over and over again.
just check out my latest house submission. its got variation and everything.
you'll learn more as you work with music, and i can tell you've got a little something, so keep goin for it.