I think it's pretty good, you can tell that you've worked hard with this because i can't hear anything wrong with it. Not the best I've ever heard but still pretty neat, nice work! :)
Could one be so blessed as to use this as a background song in a youtube video I'm making? :P
I was thinking about looping the first 16 seconds or so, it would be very neat! :)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.