Strong start if not a bit overused. In fact, this song just seems rather generic until the 1:10 mark. That's not bad, just makes it a bit forgettable. 1:39 is where your real song is. Perhaps build more off of that instead of just looping beats while occasionally adding random clips. In the end, I liked it, just seems a bit loopy and generic as a result.
thank you for your input.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.