The song was pretty neat from a production standpoint. It sounded nice, flowed nice and was very peaceful sounding. So good job on that.
From a composition standpoint, It's a little odd how you sampled commercial music to produce this. I find myself wondering how much came from the commercials and how much is your own work. All in all, it was kinda nice and cool but didn't seem TOO unique enough for me to really enjoy it. But it seems like you're on the right path so keep going!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.