I can handle trance and repetitive music once I know the genre, but really, nothing stands out. Really, I recognise these as the DirectWave Dreampads (I've actually used them for Whispers in the Rain and Arise Once More) with a beat slapped onto it. I'm fine with repetition (songs need some degree of it for certainty), but:

Songs need to build up, even though they are repetitive. Yes, the drums have some buildup, but that's it. There is no progression that lets you dive deeper into the piece. So because of that, this piece has no oomph. If you don't want to use so many chords, if you want to stick with just G, there are many ways of doing it while pulling the person deeper. I suggest you listen to one version of the Vocaloids counting Pi to one single G chord (the Aozorised version) -- that should give you an idea of buildup.

The whole point of Trance is to make the person feel lost in the music. That's what we see with at least some people when they're in, say, Ministry of Sound. This doesn't make me feel really lost in the music; it feels terribly disjointed.

However, I must commend you for your mixing -- in many ways I find you're better than me for it.