I gotta agree with ForeverBound, there were a lot of places where the volume seemed a bit unbalanced. Most of it involved the guitar being too prominent while everything else was barely audible. Also (And this may just be a personal preference), I think that this kind of song would end better on a sustained note than a fade out. As far as the actual composition of the piece, you did an excellent job. With a few tweaks and adjustments, I'd definitely say that this is album material.
Oh wow, you guys are right, i released this months ago. Back then I didn't pay much attention to volume balance. I have studied more theory and technics. But your right, the guitar is blaring loud, and the piano sounds out of place. If i was review this now what i did months ago i would have been more been more harsh than you guys. Thanks for your constructive criticism. I will release an fixed version of the song when i get around to it.
first impression nice then the piano came really bad in.
guitar is too loud.
but the rest was really good.
keep it going!!!