Place some hats in the beat to tie it all together.
the bass is pretty good, the panning effect works well with it.
with a melody this song would be complete

Pretty good for a first try, keep it up. Don't let anyone tell you, you cant do something. This stuff takes practice like all the other skills on the planet. Some stronger kicks and snares would do this song well though. You might try experimenting with harmonious progressions to add flavor to your tracks.