Hi, gastarvonil. Your composition, is quite good. I will rate it at 4. I compose a wide range of music myself and thats better then some battle themes i have heard. However if you would allow me to state and few lines of constructive criticism: for starters you have a good drum sequence and the timpani is of good quality. However i when i was listing, i imagined a short drum-roll of snare drums at the end of every other measure. And i would recommend you bring out the bass in your equalizer, for me the treble was a bit high.
But altogether, quite an engaging piece.
The snares for me was the signal for another rehearsing part. It seems the first part would be the beginning and the second would be the building part to another sequence. :)