Hello again gastarvonil! I seem to be on a review roll tonight lol! (i write reviews for other things on a regular basis) The end of the song has some good composition in it. A bit repetitive for almost 5 minutes, but perhaps if you explained to me what sort of picture you were thinking of when you thought of this song. Such as a description of the journey that this song is the dawn of.
Best regards, and keep it up.
I'm thinking of being in a starting journey with lots of expectations on the things to come so I came up with this concept. :)