YOU NEED SOME BASS DAMNIT!!!!
other than that great composition.
whattt....That was the whole main topic of the song! on my headphones it sounds like it has lots of bass, but you're right. on my computer speakers it does sound like it barely has no bass.
Not bad, very catchy and smooth sounding, I like your want to keep dynamic range and clarity you did well with that. Its volume isn't low to me well that may be due to the nice low responsiveness of my AKG headphones. But yeah in terms of volume I would probably myself would have added a nice limiter and boosted the overall perceived volume up just 1 to 4 decibels. But that's just an optional thing, this song is perfect it for what it is. Its simple not to much going on not any cons I can think of but anyhow pretty cool song. I could see this song being used in a game as someones theme or a video with text as nice smooth background music I am so downloading it ;]
Thanks brevlin! Yeah I kept it really simple so it would be easier for me to mix/master. And yeah, hopefully someone will like my songs enough to put it on their game!
Thanks for the long response i really appriciate it. Stay tuned for more songs by me