The build up is quite interesting. I like the drum works and the sudden ending of them led to ambient sounds.
The only complain is the piano. Not artificial, but hard. Hard against the soft instruments. Strings and piano do not work well in this case. Perhaps this is something you had tried very hard to work on your previous songs? Creating something new is hard. We should try but in the right way.
Thankyou! I love the choirs at the end, made me fall in love with voices again lol.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.