My ears were serious hurting, how you worked on this song without your ears doing the same, is a mystery to me. I agree with stratkat, make a song more pleasing sounding, this is way too harsh. If this is what you do when you are bored, I suggest you find a new hobby.
Starting with your kick it needs to be a LOT tighter, the song itself isn't very pleasing, and it's really harsh. Tbh I'd focus on making something better/more pleasing sounding, but if this is what you're going or then it's not something most people would like.