The beats and distortion is spot on, but the melody seems a little choppy and could use some work. If you could find a way for the verses in the melody to play more smoothly, that would make a great improvement. All in all it is still a really good song especially for a franchise like silent hill. Good on you.
Fairly close. A little refinement needed here and there perhaps, but otherwise well done.
i love silent hill, i like the song you have hear, i think that the base sounds distorted but the melody is spot on. i think if you could bleed the base so that it fades out becoming less of a hard note that might be cool, what do you think?
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