I think what you have works really well, and the beat is at a really good level relative to the other instruments. Feels like a great intro that you need to then transition out of around the one-minute mark, maybe as late as 1:30. Needs a climax, and some kind of progression.
Yah this was scored in one fast recording without further adds or fixes.
I've saved the project data so I might alter it later. :)
about the climax and overall melody. I'm creating music with these melodies so that it will become easier for me to compose on my computer keyboard. It's difficult sometimes and it actualy prevents me from doing proper notes.
hey i really like this the constant dark mellow to it really appeals to me
I'm glad it does. :)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.