Cold breezes and gentle winds are bringing in the dark clouds to summon the rain.
My overall impression on this was that the song was not fluent. It was well executed at some places, yet at other times, you just broke the rithm without transition anyhow and got to another part. You need to folow a "logical" pattern, just like when writing a text.
0:37 was... um, you get it, right?? Not the good notes!
111122223138 responds:
I knew this was rough, but I've got to work on smoothing out songs. This was, in some ways, a demo.
Thanks for the review though!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
TheZaaL 
