Great. Like it a lot. Seems a little rough at places, but that's all right.
I'd say that it needed to be longer, but that's not really a criticism, is it? :)
Thanks man i really appreciate your comment :) It is rough in places, particularly the lead parts and solos, they are quite sketchy! And by the way this is the longer version lmao :P The original is like just over 2 minutes, but I'm glad you enjoyed it enough to think it was too short, thanks again!
You definitively should consider getting better drum sample. I feel like they are a little bit weak compared to the agressivity of the guitars, in particular the kick, the hat and the ride.
The bass is definitively adding a whole new dimention, which was lacking on the first version. I like that!
The double pedal at 0:38 seems odd past a certain amount of time, but that's just a minor flaw!!
And, yeah, you made an amazing job on the guitars! Keep it up!
You know, I started off thinking that the drum samples I was using were okay when I used to do one track guitars/bass guides for me and my band to learn, but you're right they don't pack much of a punch anymore :/ I'll have to invest some time and money into getting a new plugin or something, I'll see what I can do in the future :)
It's a hit, man. The bass fills the whole deal up fine, and your guitar playing is like infinitely more confident than the original version, heh. Straight-up Metal, tried and true!
Thanks a lot man I really appreciate this comment and the one you made on the original version :)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.