Good song, technically great!
BUT (yeah, I love this word!!) it lacks an epic feel to be a "among greatest track ever made on Newgrounds". I would have loved (thats my ultimate daydreaming right there, it's not a absolute necessity to add everything (or anything lol) there :P) :
1. Light string in the background : always feel good
2. More present bass : mabe layering something else WITHOUT OVERDOING IT!!!
3. Add reverb on certain part : MAKE IT EPIC!!
4. A... hmmmmmm, muffin!
Good job on this!
intro has a very nice pace, drums and bass are solid and the bursts of fx noise really fill out the space
the main melody is supported by a fairly basic harmony, but it works. the lead does sound a bit retro, I suppose. I liked the alternative melody at 1:11, in particular where its rising chromatically
really liked the pitch-rise bit of bass that's introduced at 1:52, particularly when it's played simultaneously with the chord hits later. It was a welcome transition from the first section. I kinda wish you dedicated a larger portion to building something on top of that bass - layer another melody perhaps
to me it seemed like it was kinda losing energy at 2:25. the first half of the song was more interesting
I gave it a full score because there doesn't seem to be anything wrong with the technical aspect of the track - solid beat, good mix. that's not to say that it's perfect. regardless, good job
grounder that much although I am the same production DnSzGeRb
very good to excellent for rhythm has not much English
This is really good. While listening to it, I didn't get the feel of a 70's beat, but I did get a little bit of a retro feel. Some vocals would really make this thing old-school sounding. I did think the song was amazing though, with all the twists and turns the melody made. Now it's stuck in my head. XD Anyway, nice job.
Nice that you are feeling it , im happy you feel it =) For me its like some police serie, sounds like police song , i dont know why , haha stuck in head is good :D then its mission possible... i know that vocals would be very nice , i have mic and stuff but im not so good in lyrics , if i put vocals it got to be a bit simplier song ... less melody and more vocals maybe ?
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.