That was a beautiful piece really nice melodies, flawless transition and it contain a really epic feeling on it. The only thing that I'd recommend you is a better mixing, there were times that I had to force myself to hear the melody. In the beginning it felt nice like it was a intro in crescendo but then I noticed that the melody was below the strings so I was kind of upset that I couldn't hear clearly everything. You can work a little bit on the compression too but overall it was a awesome song.