Flow and delivery are good. The sound quality is tight. The mixing and effects on the last bars was swizhagasmic. The rhyme scheme could've benefited from some more dynamic change ups, specifically in the first bars. I've heard your other songs; I personally prefer the real talk you do in those ones then the swag killah stylez in this here joint. My preference I guess. Keep at it Sunraw, you can be a killing maniac if you put your mind to it!
I will murder everyone. Everyone that exists in the world. Thanks bro.
Hahaha love it man;
Say, is your production value ever going to peak out?
PEAK OUT ALREADY haha
Hahaha! Thank you man, appreciate the praise. Always try to keep shit improvin'.
haha. Good track. "shut the fuck up before I kill you" made me actually laugh.
Thanks Wyze. Was going for the entertainment value, glad I got a laugh out'a'ya! haha!
Deep down I kind of hope this is based on reality.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.