Well, you most definitely have your own style, which is hard for a lot of people to do. The only things I would try to improve on is making the track sound more full at times. Maybe some nice heavy low end beats. I was kind of expecting something at the first build up and it just felt empty. Resolutely fixed with the next build up though. Try to flow between sections a little more as well. Overall it is a very good and unique sound. I'll be waiting for more!