This is great. Love the melody. Love the atmosphere. Love the falling chord progression. Singing, arrangement, lyrics, that hypnotic outro... nothing I'm not impressed by. So cold yet so good!
A few small things:
-- You actually removed the background harmonics during the last instance of the chorus. I think this is when you can use MORE layers/effects to drive that falling/losing control feeling home.
-- The drum rolls during the outro could continue for just a tiny bit longer. Now it feels like the drums dropped the torch right the moment before they're supposed to pass it on.
-- Obviously, "winds blows" is grammatically wrong, and I really don't understand "it's 6pm I'm but she's I don't know for sure." But they are minor things that don't deduct from the listening experience.
-- While I didn't listen to much Beatles, I didn't think of them until I read these comments. . I think it's good to let your style DEVELOPE itself as you make more music and acquire more about what you like. Trying to FORCE your way out of the shadow of some other people is a good thing, IMO. I'm sure there are a lot of good/popular bands that exhibit some Beatles influence, just like half the NBA would tell you that they patterned their game after Michael Jordan growing up. Just make sure you create what you enjoy!