This is certainly a more uplifting one. I really like the section at about 1:15. Actually from there out i think it's really nice. At first i thought the beginning sounded a bit messy but on subsequent times through it didn't, so it tightened up after i heard it once. Anyway, this is a good start.

Have you heard of the "Metal Music Contest" here on newgrounds this month? The deadline for submissions is April 20th. I don't know if something like this would be too atmospheric for them, but maybe check it out if you haven't. I started making a new song which i might submit to them, i'll have to see what it's like when i'm done. There is some seriously professional sounding entries already, so it's a bit scary. Although i suppose just being a part of it would get your music more exposure, but you don't want to get the booby prize! hahaha, i don't think they give one out but still...