No, no, no.
Mayne, this track made me laugh. And then reminded me of myself like 3 years ago, tryin to make tracks. But your flow is terrible, theres nothing to it. Just sentences. And your wayyy to close to the mic, your spittin all over it. And try to calm down, I hear you takin real deep breaths and its all comin out on the mic. I'm gonna take a guess that your using windows sound recorder? Its kool, I started out like that too. How old are you, you sound not far from my age. If you need some help producing your vocals, hit me up.