This is impressive for your first song!!!!!
However, I would recommend more bass and not be too repetitive (I made that mistake before).
Other than that, it's awesome!!!!
I can't seem to find the original mix on your YouTube channel...
In my vision is this good from around 1:33. I don`t know what you other guys think.
It's AWESOME! I love it. Even your first song on New grounds is rhythmic :) One thing though, try not to be too repetitive, try different verses or adding a melody to the original in the middle. Also, try to put more bass in it. Otherwise, it's pretty much perfect. :D
Nice - just wish it had a stronger bass. And a shorter intro.
well the original mix has got a longer intro but also an extra verse
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