You kinda sound a bit stuffy. Got a cold or something? ahahha
Not to mention you kinda messed up on the lyrics a bit. Could be better could be worse so I'll let you off with 2.5/10
I don't mean to be a troll but your singing is poor. Sorry.
But the music is a classic
It's fine :D The music isn't actually mine, though. Is there anything you think I can do to improve? I appreciate your honesty :)