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Blind Elephants Dali

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Author Comments

Your world was blind.
He had come to open your eyes.


I can dig it! The intro reminds me a lot of Stinkfist by Tool, which is a plus in my book. My favorite part was when the guitar start doing some killer riffs around the 2:00 mark. This song would get a 5 if not for the parts where the guitars sound kind of off. A prime example of this is around the 1:00 mark. Something about the timing just felt off to me. The guitars didn't really flow well together as much as they attempted to, but instead just clashed.

Another problem I had with the song was the jarring transition from 0:55 to 1:00. The tempo of the song drastically changed from a slow build to a fast pace. Have the two parts lead into each other more. One example I find in a lot of music is where it stops for a second or two and then picks up with the fast pace.

Overall, to make this song a five, work on transitions between parts and possibly work on the timing of the guitars. Make them flow together more (if that makes sense). Aside from that, this is a solid track. Rock on!


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the main riff sounds alot like Led Zeppelin's song "Kashmir", the Tech Metal parts are really cool though, reminds me of Yantra or so (Y)

Sounds familiar... :P
Still a good track for the slow walk towards an epic battle. Love the patterns at the 2:00 mark. Starting to get pretty crazy, honestly you just need that lead guitar going down some solo's during that mark.

A tiny bit repetitive but cool song, good job

BiviZ responds:

Yeah, you're right, but I tried to make the song more interesting.

Sounded pretty repetitive. Should be some bass in the song, would help make it drive on.

BiviZ responds:

Yeah, you're right. But I do not have a bass guitar.

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Credits & Info


4.41 / 5.00

Apr 5, 2012
2:32 PM EDT
Heavy Metal
File Info
11.1 MB
4 min 51 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.