Were you influenced by Xorcist?
I think you got something interesting here though it's not pure ambient, but still great.
Sound Design: Interesting take on the whole Industrial Ambient fusion genre. While the drum beat prevents this from being a pure Ambient track; what you did with those are pretty good. Oh, and clever use of sidechaining for the soundscapes. I think you got that dark sound down to a T.
Composition: It was obvious you weren't aiming for something melody driven considering this genre, but your use of effects compensated for it.
Other: I can see this being used in either a game or a movie and know some people who can use your musical talent. (ex: lilg)
-Great sound design
-Nice mix of genres
-Not much in terms of melodies
Overall: Deshiel, I'll give you a nine for this. (4.5/5)
I uploaded another version which was supposed to have melodies aswel.
ended up only melodying the intro :D
Thanks for your review man its great but very unexpected :D
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.