Really liked the arrangement.
Here's some feedback on improvements:
Loved the use of the static at the start.
After about a minute it started to get annoying though. Probably shape it to gradually soften.
The second type of static was kind of off beat and a little random.
Really liked the military drum beat!
Maybe vary the instrument arrangement a little bit to have solo's. Right now it just keeps on going the same for 5 mins. Gets kind of repetitive.
Hope it helps.
Keep up the awesome work!