Hey bro, i read the last comment, if u use fl studio, if u want send me the flp and i can work on your beat for u as an example, ill keep the kick u used and put it one more hat for affect, but yea i def liked the melody :)
I could, but on what do I send it to you? And my version is 10.0 Producer Edition I think. And there's alot of sounds that come from my soundpacks if I'm not mistaken. :]
Change the lead into something more .... kicking.. harder. Add different drum pattern.
The rest is pretty good.
Thanks for the advice! I still got practice the beat. I know I can do nice melody and all, but it's just dat drum : / . It's the worse part of any stuff I do x). I might listen to drum n bass tunes, it might give more ideas :] .