Some points about the start:
1) Loving the intro
2) Nice decrescendo
3) I agree with the guy before me, add a sub to this song and you're all set!
Great techniques for the production and structure of the song though, i can give you some major credit for that!
I got the levels under control and I agree with both comments about the sub bass and am fixing that right now as I type this. Hopefully the finished version will be posted tonight.
This song has great potential. What it needs is a solid bassline underneath the track - something catchy, that doesn't sound repetitive when played throughout.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.