Hmmm, I like the main rhythm, very cool.
However a change midway through would be good I think, of course this is all opinion on my part... Its just someone with a shorter musical attention span like me tend to get bored with certain things if there not a lot of change. I can tell you have quite the ability for sure, because this song is not easy.
I think some better drum sounds would help too, you should check out EZ Drummer or better yet Steven Slate Drum Samples. Its well worth the money.
I know from myself as I am trying to make my own songs and it is hard to get the drums right, I am a drummer and I have to use programmed drums to make my stuff just because its hard with the whole "One man band " thing. Although it kills me to do so, I use them and it sounds pretty decent. Just throwing some stuff out there on that subject.
I will for sure keep my eyes open for some more stuff from you, I sense a lot of potential here! :D
Thanks a lot!
Hah, this is an old version actually. Haven't updated it in a long time. Most recent version clocks in at 18:30 and is much better in my opinion.
But nevertheless, thanks for the great review! I will consider getting better drum samples for sure.
Another version of this with some of the odd sounding notes in the beggining gone would be good (unless they've got a reason to be there.)
Heck, I'd remix this, if only I hadn't finished secondary school just recently. That's basically music = gone for me.