Loops should get their own rating category...
It isn't all that bad, It could be used in a Kirby dream-like sequence. It's main problem lies in the continuation of the loop, the melody cuts off a bit awkwardly. It's a shame that there isn't a whole separate category for loops, because some of the nice ones get horrible scores just because many people don't understand what a loop is, and other people refuse to vote high because it takes less effort to make a loop than a whole track. Almost nobody wants to see a short loop taking a place higher than a whole piece. Anyway, I made my short Kirby loop and it got decent scores, so I decided to listen to other tracks in Kirby category, yours was listed among the worst ones, but I gave it a listen, and hey, I find it to be pretty decent ;)
Yeah, you're right...
It's somehow Kirby'ish. I don't know why? I rated low because it's too short, has poor diversisty
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