Rn B/pop concept/demo

Comments/citicisms appreciated :)

-Yeah I know I need to work on my singing. I just had this idea while I was walking back from work yeaterday and had to lay it down xD

Lyrics:
Now I know it's not easy
When your'e lost and don't know what to do
when nobodys left to catch you
I feel like im fading away

And I know that i'm better than this
to let myself just dissolve
I know that I can get through this
I just need to bare the cold

Bare the cold x4