Like Mousetache said, it could use some bass! Also, towards the end, change up the beat of the drums; at least the hi-hat. Pretty good otherwise!
Really nice intro, when it drops there's no bass though! Could do with a nice reese bass or at least a sub in my opinion. Don't let me tell you how to make your own music though, just my opinion!
Thank You, will keep these tips in mind as I continue on to finishing this. As I said this is my first try at dnb so I know I'm a noob at it. Appreciated!
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