Hey, this is pretty sweet music.
Okay, some suggestions.
The main instrument up until 1:15 or so sounds great, but it doesn't carry the melody that great. It's pretty echoey and makes it hard for me to pick out exactly what's going on.
I think you should work on the the melody from 1:30 to 2:00 or so - mainly the melody. I think you're trying to go for something dancey, which is fine, but you need a little more variation/strength on the melody line. Right now it's like the melody is hiding behind the chords from the other instrument. Bring it out!
Minor nit: That reverse crash sound you're using is repeated enough to be expected. I'd suggest you to switch it up.
This song takes until about 1:30 or so to really start being great. I bet you could truncate that introduction time without losing too much.
Anyway, nice song. Bring out that melody line and it'd be great. Keep it up!
BTW - saw you on the audio advertisements forum post. If you could review one of my two recent pieces, that would be great :-)