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Wohoooo another song has been created! In my opinion my music keeps getting better :D
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Hey, this is pretty sweet music.

Okay, some suggestions.

The main instrument up until 1:15 or so sounds great, but it doesn't carry the melody that great. It's pretty echoey and makes it hard for me to pick out exactly what's going on.

I think you should work on the the melody from 1:30 to 2:00 or so - mainly the melody. I think you're trying to go for something dancey, which is fine, but you need a little more variation/strength on the melody line. Right now it's like the melody is hiding behind the chords from the other instrument. Bring it out!

Minor nit: That reverse crash sound you're using is repeated enough to be expected. I'd suggest you to switch it up.

This song takes until about 1:30 or so to really start being great. I bet you could truncate that introduction time without losing too much.

Anyway, nice song. Bring out that melody line and it'd be great. Keep it up!

BTW - saw you on the audio advertisements forum post. If you could review one of my two recent pieces, that would be great :-)


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jasfab
Author

Listens
898
Downloads
41
Votes
15
Score
4.47 / 5.00

Uploaded
Mar 31, 2012
5:29 AM EDT
Genre
Techno
File Info
Song
8.1 MB
3 min 32 sec
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Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.