It's good dude, but i keep hearing the same loop in the song. It's not there all the time but almost everywhere. Try switching a little :3
And the percussion is a little silent, might be might crappy headphones, but I think you'll understand.
It's a nice build up around 1:15 - 1:30 :D
Good job, keep it up :)
Thanks for the tips, im not that good at making music but im trying to get better