Shit son, thats so sinister sounding :) Going on my ipod for sure :D
Now I remember, I had to go listen to the wip to remember what I said. I must admit its is a improvement and I commend you. Good Job and congratz!! But there is still room for improvement and I think you will improve over time as you gain experience.
Loved this obviously. Loved the dark background music with the bass it was an awesome combination. Going to have to keep an eye on you.