Nice! I can imagine myself walking in an abandoned hospital, all alone, until I here the screams of lost souls wandering and searching for their next victims. I then get consumed in their power.

Anyways. It's pretty cool, and it does give me the feel of suspense, which is nice (because the title does mention "SUSPENSE" in it). I have nothing to add besides the fact that the rippling/static wouldn't seem appropriate, but most of the time it was in the right place.

5/5 - 10/10!