well... it's strange, which I do like, but I think you need to work in the volume of the synths, since anyone wearing earphones would not feel this song very pleasent xD
I do like the crazyness, but try to keep the song crazy, not to drive people crazy!
This is nice, try to work in the volume, the structure is fine!
I hope I didn't sound rude, anyway keep working!
It's very strange :) the synths are a bit off as far as volume goes, and that stands out especially near the end. It could use some more fine tuning in that respect without a doubt.