haha this song reminded me of watercolour by pendulum XD the emotion took an un expected twist I think around .50 seconds when that evil laugh came in...made it feel more ominous than before...I've really got no critique, great work for three hours man!

Nice job, really nice music to say you made it in only 3 hours. I'm not much of a musician, but I come on here to download various music, and this was amazing (downloaded).
Really smooth song, but you had like 4 seconds of nothing at the end (which is kind of annoying when you replay it on itunes, because you're wondering if the next song is coming on or not xD).

But seriously dude, nice job and keep up the good work :)