needs to be a little better polished and a little more in tune. chord progression needs to be a little better presented to the listener. you may wanted to have cleaned up that rhythm line a little bit. a clear beat could really be found at the beginning of the track. otherwise, you have potential to make a great song.
you may want to have slowed it down too, blues typically doesnt flow so fast, and it typically has a more expanded chord progression than just one chord.
anyhow, id like to see what you come up with in the future. keep me posted.
Thanks for the listen and the review dude!
Yeah.. Maybe I'll do a more bluesy version someday-- this one really should qualify as general rock or something else, but in comparison to my other stuff, I couldn't think of a better place to put it than blues. Thanks again for the constructive criticism dude, it's much appreciated.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.