Sonic Love - Andrew Pabon

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This is about how relationships moving fast can sometimes ruin it with a little Sonic the Hedgehog tune.

Sonic Love is coming

I didn't want to fall in love again
Cause I know the pain and sorrow
When It ends
She broke my heart and I
Rana Ranaway
And all I could stand was the end of the Day
End of the Day

So understand why I dread talking to you
Cause I feel those feelings that I once knew
I'd runaway but I like everything you say
And oh I can't wait
Till the end of the day

Sonic Love ends the fun to fast
Kills emotion before it can last
Leaves no questions to be known or asked
She just Knows that I keep running

No Time for anyone but me
Last time i gave my love for free
Broken and shattered forever I'll be
Cause that Sonic Love is coming

I'm so broken up


The song is really catchy :) and the lyrics are great, really moving :) The best advice I can give or suggestion I can make is that open it up a little and maybe intensify it a bit. The reason why is because I can totally see myself getting lost in this song when at a nightclub but there isn't a huge build for me to be like "OMG HERE IT COMES......BAM!" but anyways keep up the good work. You get 5 from me :)

AEPfx responds:

Thank you

For what it is, it's not bad. It's just not really my thing.

But that's not why I knocked the score. My criticism is with the vocals. They're too rigid and inflexible, trying too hard to match the tempo of the music, and as a result the words feel drawn out in some spots and compressed in others. It's a mistake that I've heard a lot from songs in the last few years, and it's part of what made the 2000's so musically unimpressive. Lyrics should flow freely, keeping time with the music but not beholden to its every movement.

AEPfx responds:

I honestly have to idea what I am doing when It comes to recording and compression stuff. As the sing style, personally, I like the way it turned out but I understand how someone wouldn't.

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4.35 / 5.00

Mar 22, 2012
9:17 PM EDT
File Info
9.4 MB
4 min 6 sec

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