The song is really catchy :) and the lyrics are great, really moving :) The best advice I can give or suggestion I can make is that open it up a little and maybe intensify it a bit. The reason why is because I can totally see myself getting lost in this song when at a nightclub but there isn't a huge build for me to be like "OMG HERE IT COMES......BAM!" but anyways keep up the good work. You get 5 from me :)
For what it is, it's not bad. It's just not really my thing.
But that's not why I knocked the score. My criticism is with the vocals. They're too rigid and inflexible, trying too hard to match the tempo of the music, and as a result the words feel drawn out in some spots and compressed in others. It's a mistake that I've heard a lot from songs in the last few years, and it's part of what made the 2000's so musically unimpressive. Lyrics should flow freely, keeping time with the music but not beholden to its every movement.
I honestly have to idea what I am doing when It comes to recording and compression stuff. As the sing style, personally, I like the way it turned out but I understand how someone wouldn't.