Very cool stuff

I'm gonna go out on a limb here and guess that Reznor is one of your influences?

Great job on this - I voted 5.

Bassline and timbre was great, vocals weren't bad at all and the lyrics were adequately obtuse.

Strings were well used - really supported the rest of it in a nice sort of NIN way.

Awesome job - I loved it personally and I think you've got a real shot at going pro.