ok so some key things you have picked up on the way 1 it grabbs you before 20 seconds are up which i think is very important. 2 your progression was very nice the transitions flowed very nicely. 3 it was layered with a lot of different synths not just a single melody harmony drum thing there was what 5 synths in there thats good especially how you warped some of the synths.
key things you need to work on 1 after the first grab you need a jump to elevate the song and grab the listener even more this jump is usually about 30 seconds after the first grab. 2 this one is hard so you dont have to but if you can add a sub harmony and elevate it into a counter melody or even into the main melody of course that tactic is fairly advanced im sure you could do it your getting really good.
my opinion personally. i love it but the piano in the beginning needs to be messed with also FINISH THE SONG!! please??
haha, thanks, does it really sound like there are 5 synths? because after the piano part cuts out it's all the same melody layered with 2 synths. I worked hard on that melody, I hope that doesn't destroy the song :(, but I have a couple of different versions in the works trying out different ideas so it may take awhile to finish this one, but I'll try to apply your suggestions, and hopefully the finished project lives up to it's potential . . .as a side note, in my typical fashion it may be unpredictable what I come up with, lol
Pretty nice! There is so much going on, would like to hear a longer version. Keep on going!
Thanks, I plan on making this into a full length song, it may take awhile, but i'm glad you reviewed :)
diggin it man, i think its powerful! love the piano as well!