verse 1 - Preemptive breathing advice, in hindsight it worked on the other guy.
verse 2 - Sounded like he was running low on breath from long winded lines, shitty shitty verse outro.
verse 3 - Had my vote before I even had to listen to verse 4.
verse 4 - Caught his breath, but not enough for my vote.
Vote goes to Flip Point.
Flip | Verse One |
Not bad man. I wish you used better vocab, move from the 8th grade level to college shit.
Your flow is very old school sounding, sounds like its got a heavy influence in you, which is a good thing.
Slap | Verse One |
I hate your flow man... So much.
But you are funny lol. Your lyrics arnt bad at all, I just cant take you seriously man lol.
Flip | Verse Two |
Way better than your first one. More punches than the last verse, great rhymes, great flow. Over all good second verse man.
Slap | Verse Two |
The santa diss missed.
A lot of your disses on your second werent nearly as prolific as your first verse.
The dane cook line made me geek, haha.
Overall, I still hate your flow, haha, not as great punches, and more rambling.
Overall my vote goes to | Flip Point |
( 3.5 for his flow )
As much as I hate to say it, Slap's mic quality hurt him. Delivery is a part of it, and being grating isn't gonna win battles. Likewise, it was hard to hear what he was saying most of the time, as opposed to Flip, where I heard pretty much every word. His rythym was also pretty off like a lot of people said. Flip had great lyrics, good flow without settling into a single rhyme scheme, and just sounded better all around.
Also, a trend I'm noticing is to compare every white rapper to Eminem. It isn't an original insult, and it doesn't really apply here (not that it usually does). Even if Flip did sound a little like him, that's a good thing. If you want to get into rapping you should at least listen to a few Em songs, he's rap history--so his influence is going to be pretty widespread.
flip: -3 points (good exit, too many obvious prewrittens and filler)
slap: -4 points (bad disses, bad flips, bad exit)
flip: -4 points (1 good diss, filler, filler, prewritten, prewritten, filler)
slap: 6 points (5 good flips, 1 good diss)
Slap 2 to -7
Flip had better flow and rhymes. Slap had a few good punches, but was contrived and annoying for the most part.
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