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Short little 32 verse on a Taizuku instrumental.
I wanted to try something different. Here you go.
Check it.

You ever sat in dark?
Imagine a man wit wit no heart
about to attack. he starts to react like a savage at large.
Maskin his face.
Man with no trace.
Crash in the place
You stand to embrace,
to manage the task that you face.
he swings wildly,
no aim. No shame and no name.
your hearts about to explode like propane
and your blood boils like road rage.
you feel so brave,
but the fear is rising.
Against a man who takes pride in
homocides, he Pops his knife
and before he starts to slice
Adrenalines rushin
through your vains like heroin in a feminin russian.
A blessing is one thing
but this is a definate hunting.
No god. Just your life on the line.
he swipes ya eyes.
trys to blind
you fight the guy,
til he finds his nine.
now theres Gun in the picture,
it seems hes the victor.
you the victim
and hes gonna be richer
by the end of the night
while you fend for your life.
he threatens your life.
"give me your cash,
and every thing you have"
he yells through his mask,
as he threatens to blast
a powerless predicament,
you give in to his wishes
wish that he misses
if he decides to finish this.
Are you willing to risk it?
as you hand the cash you wait for his reach.
he goes for the paper,
you go for his razor.
is this more than you wagered?
The gun starts ablazin
shots fired
into the chest of both fighters.
both lives expired.
Now which man was wiser?
The man who attacked em raw??
or the man who Imagined it all?
You tell me.


Damn this is dope.

nice lil story rap here. i like.. 5d. Keep up!


I gotta say. I think your rap was way better than my beat xD

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Murdaa responds:

lol ur beat inspired and motivated me to write the rap. lmao

Nice beat and nice versers. Go on and keep it up.

This is really good! Awesome lyrics and beat, and great background music as well. The rapping could be a bit more on beat, but overall, i give it a 4.5. Good job

Murdaa responds:

the point of gettin a a beat so flat.. is to be able to rapp and no matter whan you do ur on beat. i may not of been on the same track as the rest of my verse// but thats cause the beat allowed me to do it. just sayin lol. Andre 3000.

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Credits & Info

Lead Vocals

4.48 / 5.00

Mar 19, 2012
1:53 AM EDT
Hip Hop - Olskool
File Info
1.5 MB
1 min 42 sec

Licensing Terms

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