I can see this track has a lot of potential, but it doesn't seem to be reaching for that. If made it sound more chaotic, I think it would sound better (I think the problem is instrument choice), but it's great either way! Good job!
I'm Back, and I had to hunt down more of music simply because it is epic...then again I already have a few songs on my favorite...so hunting you down wasnt hard. Epic track by the way.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.